Having reached so far, I find you but not you,
Now Nowhere to turn to, I should end up with you and only you.
where I went wrong, I cant see it better you tell me,
Pity it is, with loss of originality, even you cant tell me.
Here I am with all my life for even a not so you of you,
Coz I have a feeling that u can still be seen only through you.
And I shall wait till that moment though temporary comes,
As for me its not time that matters, my beloved "you".
12 comments:
Lovely....
I used to think that deep meaning poems, as we read in poetry books can only be written by professional writers...
I am proved wrong.
Beautiful Poem -- beautifully written...beautifully expressed.
Thanks Sandeep for you comments. They are encouraging.
Swati, Thanks. Well to be honest, I had started from ambiguity but ended up with deepness. I could yesterday feel that I was further ahead than what I had tried for.
Its nice that you can feel the deepness of poem. Thanks for comments.
Liked the way you weaved a sense of skepticism along one's love feelings (That's what I interpreted, Please add if you put other things too).
Keep it up, Man!!!
it is beautiful like always...
Hii Umesh,
Thanks for your comments. Well that is your interpretation. For me skepticism was not the idea, but I can see poem in your light too. Thanks.
Hey Siddhartha,
Thanks for your comments. I had read your earlier comments. I would like to know why you deleted them?
actually...i felt the poem is already too good :)
Thanks man. I am flattered :-)
That is so sweet. its such a subltel and heart felt poem.
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Thanks "Work From Home". Nice to see good comments for the poem.
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